cover of aspiralda volume 2

i am a young aspiring mangaka i have work on my volume 1 of aspiralda and completed it trough hard-work but also fun. even though i work alone and have no senpai i have learner a lot from my mistakes which also led me to redraw some of my chapters approximately 3 to 4 times, now i am setting on a journey to draw the volume 2 and here is the cover of the volume 2. i am happy to share my art on this site and hope you will enjoy each of them. being an amateur isn't an excuse for pursuing perfection so if you have constructive critic that can help me become a better artist feel free to let me know about it.